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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 20:40:36 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2013 20:40:36 GMT -5

Name ►: Isaac
Age ►: 14
Gender ►: Male
Canon or OC ►: Canon
Sexual Orientation ►: Heterosexual
Race ►: Human
Group ►: Medicine
Face Claim ►: Isaac - Golden Sun
Appearance ►:
General Personality ►:
Isaac is pretty much a friendly individual for the most part, but he's sort of reserved in that he doesn't like to talk a lot, relying on his friends for the most part to get out the general message. He's courageous, and doesn't mind undertaking great tasks if it means that it could make a difference in other peoples lives. He possesses a lot of tact, and goes out of his way to make sure not to offend anybody by using proper honorifics in every situation. He understands what it is to lose somebody important to you, and tries to prevent anybody else from experiencing the same pain. It is from this however, that's he's developed an annoying habit of trying to get involved in other's lives too much. Because of this, he often finds himself taking on unnecessary emotional burdens that have slowly begun to get to him over time, as well as partaking in risky situations just for the sake of another.
Likes ►:
-Alchemy
-Jenna
-Psyenergy
-Djinns
-Family
-Meals (Especially if they're cooked by Jenna)
Dislikes ►:
-People who become corrupted because of power.
-Misuse of Gifts given to others.
-Using Evil methods for personal gain.
-Felix
-Alex
Weaknesses ►:

Blind: Decreases a targets accuracy by a quarter for three turns/posts. // Has a 50% Increased Chance of being afflicted with Blind
Silence: Stops a single target/enemy from casting spells for two turns/posts. This does not effect physical attacks. // Has a 50% increased Chance of being afflicted with Silence
Physical Weakness: Stops a single target/enemy from physically attacking for two turns/posts. This does not effect magical attacks. // Has a 50% increased chance to being afflicted with physical weakness
Poison: Poisons a single target/enemy, the target loses a small amount of their health over 4 posts/turns. // 25% increase in chance of being inflicted, and causes a medium amount of health to be lost over four turns.
Aero (+15% Damage): Normal/Minor wind damage to a target sends bladed gusts of wind at a target.
Aerora (+20% Damage): Moderate/Medium wind damage to all targets/enemies torrents of wind converges on the targets.
Aeroga (+25% Damage): High/Heavy wind damage to all targets/enemies huge tornado of wind around the targets converging on them.
Dark (+15% Damage): Normal/Minor dark damage to a target a single ball of darkness hits the target.
Darkra (+20% Damage): Moderate/Medium dark damage to all targets a single ball of darkness hits each of the targets.
Darkga (+25% Damage): High/Heavy dark damage to all targets a torrent of darkness converges on the targets.

Abilities ►:

Cure: Heals minor/normal wounds/damage but can only target one person.
Cura: Heals moderate/medium wounds/damage but can only target one person.
Curaga: Heals major/heavy wounds/damage and can target a group of people.
Life: Can revive a person/character from the dead.
Revive: Revives a person/character from KO status.
Quake: Normal/Minor Earth damage to a target a small blast of rocks and dirt hit the target.
Seism: Moderate/Medium Earth damage to all targets a small blast of rocks and dirt hit the targets.
Tremor: High/Heavy Earth damage to all targets a Rocks jut out of the ground beneath the targets causing damage.
Ragnarok: Isaac strikes a single target with a giant sword that falls from the sky. // Deals 20% of the enemy's total HP and deals an additional 20% if the enemy is weak to Earth damage. Has an 4 post/turn cool down with a max usage of 2 times per battle.
Odyssey: Isaac strikes a single target twice with two giant swords forming an "X" then delivers the final flow with a Ragnarok-Sized blade in the middle. // Deals 2x Moderate/Medium Physical attack damage and deals an additional 20% if the enemy is weak to Earth Damage. Has an 5 posts/turn cool down with a max usage of 2 times per battle.
Venus Adept (Passive): Isaac is particularly affiliated with the Venus Djinn, which are of the earth element. Because of this, his total Earth Elemental Damage is increased by 15%
Squire (Passive): Isaac is in training to become a respectable swordsman. Luckily his skills aren't too shabby. When wielding a sword, Isaac's physical attack damage is increased by 10%.
Meggido: Isaac unleashes the power of his Sol Blade, causing Armageddon to rain down upon all enemies. Deals 25% of the enemies total HP and deals an additional High/Heavy Earth damage if the enemy is weak to Earth Damage. // Has a thread limit of one use.

Weapons ►: -Sol Blade
"A weapon said to contain the power of the sun itself. It unleashes the attack 'Meggido', which causes Armageddon to fall down upon it's enemies."

(Crappy Photoshop is Crappy.)
History ►: Isaac's History

When Isaac and crew unknowingly unleashed the powers of alchemy upon the world, many changes began happening fast. Isaac began to try and escape from the Sol Sanctum, but instead found himself trapped by the wise one and was given a task: Prevent the spread of alchemy into the world. Agreeing hastily, he was going to set out to accomplish this task but instead the Sol Sanctum collapsed on him, and he was thought to be perished. Unknowingly, he was transported unconsciously to a location called Omphalos where he woke up rather dazed and disoriented. With his head somewhat foggy, he decided he could only explore the place to find out what exactly happened to him.
Relatives ►:
-Kyle (Father)
-Dora (Mother)

Alias ►: Kyon
Roleplay experience ►: About two years. I started at Reddit but I realized that I really didn't care for the one-sentence crap that they did. I found out about forum roleplaying and haven't went back ever since.
Password ►: Removed
Other Characters ►: I don't have any.
How did you find us ►: Was looking up stuff on Dissidia when I found this. I was like, ZOMG U SRS? Couldn't resist taking a look.

Last Edit: Jul 9, 2013 12:33:25 GMT -5 by Beast

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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 20:43:45 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2013 20:43:45 GMT -5

Not sure where to put this, but I have a couple of questions:
1) What's the Alias for? Is that for if your character has another name to go by?
2) The Abilities. I looked at some other people for reference. I saw that most of them had some pre-approved spells as well as their own stuff. Is that alright if I do the same for Isaac?
3) Same with weaknesses. I saw some pre-approved spells and stuff as weaknesses. Mind if I do that also?
4) Character's History. I see most of them end up in Omphalos, is that where I should make Isaac Go in his backstory?

Last Edit: Jul 7, 2013 20:46:04 GMT -5 by Deleted

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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 20:46:23 GMT -5

Post by Beast on Jul 7, 2013 20:46:23 GMT -5

To your first question it's your cbox name. The alias isn't to the characters or anything, it's your name. So we know who you are.

Yes you can as long as it applies to the character, and suits him. And the weaknesses should be either the same number or close to the abilities. Depending. We will tell you more when you look.

yes you can do that to..Though can you see the cbox at the top of the site?

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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 21:02:41 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2013 21:02:41 GMT -5

Jul 7, 2013 20:46:23 GMT -5 Beast said:

To your first question it's your cbox name. The alias isn't to the characters or anything, it's your name. So we know who you are.

Yes you can as long as it applies to the character, and suits him. And the weaknesses should be either the same number or close to the abilities. Depending. We will tell you more when you look.

yes you can do that to..Though can you see the cbox at the top of the site?

Yes. I can see the chat box at the top of the site. It makes sense now, I kept seeing the same alias on some people so I wondered why.

I'll go ahead and edit out the abilities and weaknesses. It may take awhile though, cause I have to look at some of the other people to know how it should look.

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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 23:20:36 GMT -5

Post by Beast on Jul 7, 2013 23:20:36 GMT -5

Just a few things.

Split up your personality, likes and dislikes and such so it's easier to read.

Ragnarok: Isaac strikes a single target with a giant sword that falls from the sky. // Deals 1.5x physical attack damage as well as moderate/medium Earth damage to the target. Can only be used every four posts.
Odyssey: Isaac strikes a single target twice with two giant swords forming an "X" then delivers the final flow with a Ragnarok-Sized blade in the middle. // Deals 2x Physical attack damage as well as High/Heavy Earth damage to the target. Can only be used every six posts.
Psyenergy: Isaac is an Adept at Psyenergy, and can use it to manipulate the world around him in various ways. From Grabbing objects from afar, to moving heavy objects with his mind. Because of his enhanced understanding of Psyenergy, all elemental damage he does is enhanced by 15%

And how many times can these be done in a thread? Moving heavy objects with his mind i'm not so sure about. Just um...I'm not sure take that part out? And leave the elemental damage it does?

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Isaac Jul 7, 2013 23:54:41 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2013 23:54:41 GMT -5

Jul 7, 2013 23:20:36 GMT -5 Beast said:

Just a few things.

Split up your personality, likes and dislikes and such so it's easier to read.

Ragnarok: Isaac strikes a single target with a giant sword that falls from the sky. // Deals 1.5x physical attack damage as well as moderate/medium Earth damage to the target. Can only be used every four posts.
Odyssey: Isaac strikes a single target twice with two giant swords forming an "X" then delivers the final flow with a Ragnarok-Sized blade in the middle. // Deals 2x Physical attack damage as well as High/Heavy Earth damage to the target. Can only be used every six posts.
Psyenergy: Isaac is an Adept at Psyenergy, and can use it to manipulate the world around him in various ways. From Grabbing objects from afar, to moving heavy objects with his mind. Because of his enhanced understanding of Psyenergy, all elemental damage he does is enhanced by 15%

And how many times can these be done in a thread? Moving heavy objects with his mind i'm not so sure about. Just um...I'm not sure take that part out? And leave the elemental damage it does?

My wording was bad, I apologize. I went ahead and gave them Thread cooldowns this time. I deleted Psyenergy and replaced it with Venus Adept instead. Please take a look whenever you have spare time, i'd be grateful.

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Isaac Jul 8, 2013 5:55:27 GMT -5

Post by Oblivion on Jul 8, 2013 5:55:27 GMT -5

Pending

Just a few things.

• Concerning Weaknesses -
Blind: Decreases a targets accuracy by a quarter for three turns/posts.

Is there a higher chance of it hitting him at all?

Silence: Stops a single target/enemy from casting spells for two turns/posts. This does not effect physical attacks.

Is there a higher chance of it hitting him at all?

Physical Weakness: Stops a single target/enemy from physically attacking for two turns/posts. This does not effect magical attacks.

Is there a higher chance of it hitting him at all?

Poison: Poisons a single target/enemy, the target loses a small amount of their health over 4 posts/turns.

Is there a higher chance of it hitting him at all? Does it do any extra damage against him?

Aero (15%): Normal/Minor wind damage to a target sends bladed gusts of wind at a target.
Aerora (20%): Moderate/Medium wind damage to all targets/enemies torrents of wind converges on the targets.
Aeroga (25%): High/Heavy wind damage to all targets/enemies huge tornado of wind around the targets converging on them.
Dark (15%): Normal/Minor dark damage to a target a single ball of darkness hits the target.
Darkra (20%): Moderate/Medium dark damage to all targets a single ball of darkness hits each of the targets.
Darkga (25%): High/Heavy dark damage to all targets a torrent of darkness converges on the targets.

I'm just going to assume that the (%) is extra damage.

• Concerning Abilities
Ragnarok: Isaac strikes a single target with a giant sword that falls from the sky. // Deals 1.5x physical attack damage as well as moderate/medium Earth damage to the target. Has a thread cooldown of five posts after its initial use, and cannot be used again until the cooldown has subsided.

I'm going to ask for an HP percentage of the enemies hp for this or give us an idea of what kind of damage it does. 1.5x physical attack damage? that would only be 125 damage. It's crappy as hell. If anything I'd suggest you put that it deals 2x mid damage to a target. That way you'll be dealing out 300 damage or better yet you can put -20% Max HP damage to an enemy, then add on that it deals an extra 25% damage to anything that's weak against Earth based attacks. I'd also change the cool down on it because the way you've put it? He'd have to wait five THREADS to use it again and that's hard to keep track of. Instead lower it considerably to a 4 POST/TURN cool down with a max usage of 2 times per battle.

Odyssey: Isaac strikes a single target twice with two giant swords forming an "X" then delivers the final flow with a Ragnarok-Sized blade in the middle. // Deals 2x Physical attack damage as well as High/Heavy Earth damage to the target. Has a thread cooldown of six posts after its initial use, and cannot be used again until the cooldown has subsided.

This is the same with the above. Why not just have it deal high/heavy earth damage x2? It'd be much higher. Also the cool down needs to be lowered. I'd say about 5 posts/turns if you go with what I said here with a max usage of 2 times per battle.

Venus Adept: Isaac is particularly affiliated with the Venus Djinn, which are of the earth element. Because of this, his total Earth Elemental is increased by 15%

Squire: Isaac is in training to become a respectable swordsman. Luckily his skills aren't too shabby. When wielding a sword, Isaac's physical attack damage is increased by 10%.

Please put (Passive) after the names on these two abilities.

Meggido: Isaac unleashes the power of his Sol Blade, causing Armageddon to rain down upon a single target enemy. Deals 3x Physical attack damage as well as High/Heavy Earth damage to the target. // Has a thread limit of one use.

Make this an area attack. Also again I'd suggest removing the 3x phys attack damage, unless you want to seriously gimp him. Put in a percentage -25% max hp damage to ALL enemies sounds quite nice to me with the extra bonus of high/heavy earth damage all enemies weak against earth based abilities.

• Concerning Weapons

-Sol Blade

Do you have a picture of this at all? Or maybe a description of the sword itself?

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Isaac Jul 8, 2013 9:24:41 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2013 9:24:41 GMT -5

I'm pretty sure I got everything that was mentioned this time. I made a little checklist to make things easier on myself, but I'll list what I fixed or tuned up here.

- I added increased hit percentages on his weaknesses section, and added that Poison deals more damage than usual.
- On the weaknesses to spells I put that they do increased damage to clarify.
- Fixed the skills Ragnarok, Odyssey, and Meggido In their damage and Cooldowns
- Put a description of the sword as well as a picture. (Sorry for crappy photo. My photo editing skills are sub-par, to say the least)
- Added (Passive) to the skills Squire, and Venus Adept.

Anyways, if you find anything else let me know. I'll be more than happy to put stuff in there that's necessary.

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